The pose of the first study is very well described thanks to the angle of the head and right shoulder. However, the left leg seems very thin, and also the right arm is distracted from the shoulder.
The pose of the second study is very well formed with the angle of the head, left shoulder, and the back. Furthermore, the line for the shoulder follows its direction, and the curved line for the spine is also appropriate. Even though the left arm is not obvious, the angle of the left triceps give the impression of the arm direction. Additionally, the angle of the right foot gives an essence of perspective.
The third study on the right is smaller, and gives the impression of depth. The foreshortening of the upper left leg is not appropriate.
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